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Lisa Joy šŸ³ļøā€šŸŒˆ's avatar

I absolutely love this, especially as a child from her earlier timeline. ā¤ļø

Charles Bastille's avatar

Thanks! I’m glad you liked it. It was fun to get inside her head. I guess it was more like she got inside mine. :-)

Lisa Joy šŸ³ļøā€šŸŒˆ's avatar

That seems to happen sometimes with some characters. I once read Nathaniel Hawthorne wrote the Scarlet Letter very quickly because the characters wouldn’t quit talking to him. 😊

Barbara Graver's avatar

I love the way you captured a child's perspective!

Charles Bastille's avatar

Thanks! It was one of those moments where it was like she took over my body and dictated to me or something. :-)

Nancy Santos's avatar

You had me at the title! 🤣

Linda Fairchild's avatar

Fabulous story!!! I'm Princess Reading Slut.

Charles Bastille's avatar

Lol! Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it.