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Ellen Pepper's avatar

This is exquisite: "They now exist as nothing but distant footprints of former lives stamped into the rubble of the violent shore, which rolls a wave over one of them and drags it into the ocean like it’s feeding an invisible leviathan."

Also, the tear "strolling down" is very satisfying.

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Charles Bastille's avatar

Thanks, Ellen! It's my favorite story (of mine). Do writers get to have favorites?

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Ellen Pepper's avatar

Yep!

I’m not sure which of mine is my favorite, though.

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