Thanks, Nancy, that's an awesome reaction that I wasn't expecting! But I'll admit, I liked this character, and am thinking of expanding on him some, because he's a smart ass. I don't really like smart asses, but I don't mind them in fiction.
EDIT: I liked the woman, too. They'd make a fun team.
Thanks, Nancy, that's an awesome reaction that I wasn't expecting! But I'll admit, I liked this character, and am thinking of expanding on him some, because he's a smart ass. I don't really like smart asses, but I don't mind them in fiction.
EDIT: I liked the woman, too. They'd make a fun team.
Thanks, Nancy, that's an awesome reaction that I wasn't expecting! But I'll admit, I liked this character, and am thinking of expanding on him some, because he's a smart ass. I don't really like smart asses, but I don't mind them in fiction.
EDIT: I liked the woman, too. They'd make a fun team.